Updated Immortal Empires!!
NeutralHere's a chapter list.
I.
The Train From Italy:
Searching among the Dust - [link]
II.
Burning Newsprint:
The First Stirrings of War - [link]
III.
Railway to Novgorod:
The Torn Dragon’s Tooth - [link]
IV.
Stroykagrad Sunset:
The Artillerywoman’s Fire - [link]
V.
Flaying the Road:
Turning the Wheels of the Moon
VI.
Carving the Bear’s Sigil:
Angel Feather Wings
VII.
Welcome to Hell:
Show Them How You Died
VIII.
Nightmares made Flesh:
The End of the War
IX.
We’ll meet again:
Vengeance Tastes Best Hot - [link]
X
To the Country of the Eagle:
Unfortunate Amour - [link]
XI.
The Man Next Door:
Making Polite Enquiries - [link]
XII.
All Roads lead to London:
The Capital of an Empire
XIII.
Museums And Cathedrals:
The Tiger Speaks
XIV.
Stealing from Yourself:
We Meet at Last
XV.
Dreaming the Darkness:
The Scent of Soho
XVI.
The Eagle Turns:
Memories of Blood
Devious Comments
Well, I can understand why you might want to get rid of some Nazi elements, but in my opinion, I feel it's best to go with what you really want, and this I know from personal experience. Trust me, you might just hate your own work after doing it and I'm not kidding.
Sure, some parts of it may turn certain editors off, but who cares? The process of looking for the right editor in the right house is pretty much like looking for a needle in a haystack, but hey, in the end, you're rewarded for your patience and persistence, right?
(If you ever have any questions about publishing, I'm here for you.)
but like someone else said i don't think you have to dumb it down such much on the Nazi content....i'm sure you can find someone to publish/edit it. there is this one person who is making a graphic novel with gayness and Naziness, and she found herself a publisher and is even selling the novel on amazon...so yeah..there are people that will do it for you...besides.. your story is set in a AU.. its not uber Naziness. :B
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"If you had a chance right now, to go back in time and stop Hitler wouldn't you do it?....I mean I personally wouldn't stop him cause I think he was awesome, but you would right?"
~Eric Cartman
Thanks for the support, it's really great. :3 I've still got a long way to go though.
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Hans x Koop - Support the gay Nazi love! [link]
"Are you settling accounts with Albion again, First Watch Officer?" Das Boot
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I'm not changing it too much. Just little things, to make it more seperate from the whole Nazi ideal, if you see what I mean.
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Hans x Koop - Support the gay Nazi love! [link]
"Are you settling accounts with Albion again, First Watch Officer?" Das Boot
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Spreading the U-boat liebe
Good luck with the rewrite. They can be frustrating things!
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"Why do I have six screens? Because I don't have room for eight." - Terry Pratchett
It is a certifiable fact that everything good in life is either illegal, amoral or fattening.
And there's the Albion side of things too, which is a mix of the above with Victorian, British Empire and so on as well.
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Hans x Koop - Support the gay Nazi love! [link]
"Are you settling accounts with Albion again, First Watch Officer?" Das Boot
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Spreading the U-boat liebe
I'm enjoying it, but I do keep agonizing about keeping a balance between being literary, with charecter development, and symbolism, and being interesting. I have no idea how good it is, since I'm seeing it from the inside. Imagine you're in English! Analyse me!
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Hans x Koop - Support the gay Nazi love! [link]
"Are you settling accounts with Albion again, First Watch Officer?" Das Boot
[link]
WDP! WE RULE...YOU!
Spreading the U-boat liebe
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